globes

   GLOBES is a serialized sci-fi epic adventure.  Kaydence finds herself trapped inside a snow globe, with no apparent way out. However, when two brothers from another globe land in her world, she’ll join them on their quest for answers, hoping to find her missing daughter along the way. 

"You have a lot of potential as a professional scribe. I’m drawn in by the originality of this concept. I haven’t read a script like this before, and the unique nature of the setting makes this rather appealing. It’s also very easy to envision what the series would look like moving forward, which is what development execs look for when analyzing pilots. Additionally, I found your three main characters to each be rather likable, and I wanted to spend more time with them (aka - I’d watch a second episode of this, were it to exist)..."  

-  2020 Page Awards Judge's Feedback - 

 "I’m a very big fan of how you write this pilot. For starters, I loved the way you crafted your action description. It was concise, breezy, and very easy to read. Additionally, I thought you had a great sense of style, and had several killer zingers

which really helped to amplify your voice. Equally, you are a strong wordsmith as I already mentioned above, which helps to elevate your sentence construction and overall flow of the read."  -  2020 Page Awards Judge's Feedback - 

"Overall there are great elements here, and there is an intriguing premise. The scene on the crumbling bridge is riveting, very well conceived and well executed sequence!  There are some fantastically original, somewhat surrealist images that are definitely memorable. This will be a really exciting pilot!"

-  BlueCat Screenplay Competition 1st Analysis -